The Most Exciting Thing

I slept over at my brother's friend's house. His name is Sun-Ying. My mom came in with excellent news. The water slide park was open. We shouted, "Yeah!" We quickly put on our swimming suits, rushed out the door and jumped in the car with swimming gear. When we got there it was crowded. My mom said for me not to be curt. I took my noodle and when I saw the swimming pool, I dived in and floated with my floaty. My mom and I went down a water slide. It was very fun except I got some water up my nose and my mom had a heart attack. I wanted to go on it again but my mom could not stand it so I had to go with Sun-Ying's dad. Hudson went on the more dangerous one. He went on the one with a cover. You could go upside down. I wanted to go on that one, too! But I was too young so I went in the swimming pool and swan. I was a little unhappy but that is okay, I will grow. I dove deep into the pool. Hudson dove in and touched the ground with his hand and came up. I was frightened to go that deep so I did some easy ones.